Monday, March 26, 2012

Prompt for Wed.

So first off, I think the vending machines on campus are super funny. There are WAY too many choices. All you would need to add is a toilet paper vending machine and you'd be able to live at BYU for a whole semester, while shopping only at vending machines. I also love that there are microwaves at all the vending machines, because it opens up awesome possibilities for lunch. Leftovers? Yep! Oatmeal? Easy! Corn dogs? Oh yeah!

Now that I'm finished with lunch (chicken and rice - delicious!), on to the actual post.

The biggest thing for me in my paper is poor organization. I didn't give my research the attention it deserved before I started writing, so when it came to the actual writing I was working way harder than I would have had to if I had done my research right the first time. I would have gotten more sleep too. I also wrote originally just trying to get all my thoughts on paper and back them up with good sources and that is pretty much how it came out. So to fix it, I am going to revise my introduction and thesis statement to pull everything together. The research ended up coming out alright but just took hours and hours longer than it should have. Everyone's time management suggestions on my last post were awesome and much appreciated! I am excited to try them. Next time. Because procrastination is one of my strongest natural talents : P

And now, websites. First, here are four that are pretty effective at doing what they aim to do.


Here are four that are ineffective, for various reasons.

Wednesday, March 21, 2012

This will be a pithy blog post:

Myths have lost their original meaning; what once were dogmas that formed the foundation of other cultures are now to us simple tales lacking any relationship to reality. Unfortunately, what has been lost is exactly what makes myths the basis of so much study.

With the issues paper, I have mostly struggled planning out enough time to complete the research and writing process. How have ya'll been able to plan and limit the time you spend working on it?

Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Library Instruction: A Well Thought Out Paragraph on the Merits and Lessons of Library Research Instruction with Additional Comments

Additional comments first: the iPads I could take or leave, but those library desks were awesome!!! Natalie, I think you should pull some strings and get those for our classroom. They would be so convenient for mixing up groups or passing papers around. We could take fun five-minute breaks and do things like bumper cars, desk tag, or sharks and minnows. We could even take field trips without having to get up, but we would still be getting exercise from using our legs to maneuver. We already have a pretty great class, but if anything were to make it even better, it would be getting those desks in our classroom.

I thought the library research instruction was very enlightening. I did not know that I could chat with a librarian, or that there are so many great search engines available to help me find scholarly articles and other academically sound sources. I thought it was cool that we all had iPads so we could follow along, although a few times I got distracted looking things up and missed some of the teaching. I found a couple sources for my paper that should help me with my research. I wasn't really confused about anything. It makes sense that we can use encyclopedias in our research but not as sources. It also makes sense that we want to use the work of experts to strengthen our papers' appeals to ethos. I'm glad we are working on this right now; I have a research paper that I am working on for a different class at the same time, and I feel like what I learn in Writing will help me to do a quality job on my other paper.

Thursday, March 1, 2012

Popping the question, research paper style (research paper proposal. hahaha)

For as long as I can remember, I have loved playing sports. Growing up, I played a lot of youth sports. I consider myself a sports purist--I value good sportsmanship, playing for a love of the game, and being competitive and intense but keeping things in their proper perspective. In every sport at every level, in varying degrees of severity, there will be contaminants that creep in to the game. These could have the form of a parent banking their child's college education on an athletic scholarship, and pushing their child so hard to excel that all enjoyment in playing sports is lost. These could have the form of a coach picking favorites over skill, work ethic, and fair opportunity when choosing a team because he is friends with some of the children's parents but not others'. These could have the form of an organization that withholds opportunities to participate from some children because they are poor. For lack of a more specialized term, these detracting outside influences are often referred to as politics. When framed this way, politics in sports are negative by definition. For the purpose of the article I propose to write, this definition would be expanded to include possible positive influences as well, such as a coach's use of sports to teach important life lessons or to keep kids off the street and out of gangs. Anything outside of playing sports for nothing but the sake of the game will be classed under the term politics.
This seems like a broad topic, but more than arguing the efficacy of specific examples of politics in sports, I propose to argue the concept as a whole, and use specific examples to support it when such examples would lend clarity to the argument or illustrate an essential point. Elements of the concept of sports politics to be argued would include their developmental effects on children, and whether these effects vindicate, justify, or condemn the presence of politics. They would also include a look into why these influences are introduced into youth sports and where they often come from. Finally, based on the conclusions I will draw from the thorough research I will do, I intend to argue what steps ought to be taken to maximize the positive effects of sports politics on child and adolescent development.
Preliminary research I have conducted consists of quick internet searches that yielded enough recent information to convince me that this topic is a timely one. Based on both the articles I read and my own experience, my initial stance is that politics in sports play a significant role in the psychological development of children and adolescents, and that these effects are negative more often than they are positive. I am excited about this topic because I love sports and feel like they are a very uniquely effective medium for teaching and learning on many different levels, from concepts of hard work and mental toughness to inter-personal relationships to ethics and morals. Like any form of teaching, sports and their accompanying politics are neither inherently good or bad and it matters how they are used, because by affecting the minds, morals, and perceptions of children, they influence the future in a very significant way, and the future, as a result of choices made now, has consequences for all of us.